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Cat Practice by KittenthePsycho Cat Practice by KittenthePsycho
Still need some work on legs and such, but i think im getting a little better >~<

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:iconnightstartehwolf:
ok first off this is soo cute! i meant really adorable! just like all of your art =3 ok starting off with the pros~

Pros~

the ears are really good! they are pointed and straight!
the facial expression is adorable! and you marked out where the chin..ish area is.
the back legs are good (way better then mine if you ask me =/ XD)
the eyes are adorable! and the back is really good!

now the cons D': (i hope i don't sound mean XD)

Cons~
the tail is a little short, some cats have short tails, but it doesn't look right on this picture.
the front leg looks a bit out of place and awkward :P
and the top of the head suddenly fades when getting to the ear, is that just an effect from the brush?
and now that i look at it..the eyes are un even it looks like the cat has a little lazy eye D': and we don't want that!

now this is a wonderful piece Kitten! really cute! i hope this helps you!

~Nightstar
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This is gonna be a really short critique.
The legs are really good ;U;
But what I think is weird: The cat doesn't have a neck xD Maybe lower the back down, so it looks better? ;D
And the stomach is too low :3
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imgoodatdrawing Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
Thanks 4 da fanart
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Bellywelly Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
i love the face and head. they look amazing!
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JubliantTroo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I''d like to give a little critique here. c:
You did a nice job on the back and the tail looks very nice too. Also, the face is very cute, especially the fluffy cheeks and shiny eyes. :3
But maybe the ears are a little too long? Draw them rather wider and less high next time maybe.
Check ou this picture, which will practically visualize the rest of my critique: [link]
The legs are too long on this one- hehee I can tell you draw a lot of canines. x) Aso the perspective on the front paws is a bit weird- keep the perspective on the hind paws (is that what it's called?) in mind! Also note that the front legs start further below and the shape of the hind legs could be improved a little- it's very curvy right now.
Hope that this is not too much and that I could help!
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KittenthePsycho Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012
Oh this is very helpful! :o ill take in your notes! Thank you so much!
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JubliantTroo Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad I could help. eue You're very welcome!
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ArtizticMe Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Bah, I don't believe the critique by ~Alljammedout55 :P
I think it's perfect (:
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Emberdahkitteh Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AUIGAYCRAYGHF^WTYGAFTUYAUG*YUFAY THIS IS BETTER THAN MINE. *W*
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Filmographer
Kitten this is really good!!! 8DDD Especially the head!!!
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MistyMochi Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012   Digital Artist
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It might not be much help but this as much as I could help~ u v u''
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lunarcrab Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i did some redlines for you :3
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