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Cat Practiceby *KittenthePsycho

Anthro / Digital Media / Drawings

Still need some work on legs and such, but i think im getting a little better >~<

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Critique by *Violetkay214 Dec 12, 2012, 2:59:58 PM

_{I might be yelled at for this later >~< I know this is pretty old but I have some tips.

Okay first off the paws seem a little too big, but still in proportion to the body. The front left paw though bothers me. It looks like it's turning towards the right one and hanging off the leg. Fix the angle a little if you draw another cat in this position.

The legs are way to long. Cats are much shorter and more stout. And also like ~imgoodatdrawing said, the cat needs to be longer. The tail looks fine but it could be a little more relaxed. The body is too wide to me. Some cats are buff but not this buff. It should be thinner. The chest looks flat, near the right leg. Puff it out a little.

Oh my gosh... the head... *.* Is perfect. I honestly can't draw one as well as you did. The only problems I see is that the eyes don't have pupils in them and the ears are a little big. Here's a picture of a cat to give you an little idea of how to improve on the body. [link] It isn't much or a great picture but it's something. Don't look at the head please...

I know that if you keep practicing, you will improve! You've gone so far! Don't give up!}

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Critique by ~imgoodatdrawing Oct 17, 2012, 4:03:26 PM

Okay, this is better than your normal stuff, and I'm sure I'm gonna get a bunch of unfairs from people, but I'm going to tell the whole truth.

The ears are mainly shaped correctly, and the head is too, but the rest could use a bit of work, the body is much too tall, and the eyes don't have pupils. The mouth seems to have disappeared one one side, and the arms and legs are too long, and the body is much to short, the cat's body should be quite a bit longer than it's arms and legs. the tail is okay, though its kind of stiff looking and the paws lack a lot of anatomy.

As you can see this needs quite a bit of work, but I like it alot more than a lot of your other stuff. Keep practicing, and I recommend looking at A real cat while drawing. (I would not recommend drawing books)

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~imgoodatdrawing May 1, 2013

Thanks 4 da fanart

~Bellywelly Oct 4, 2012

i love the face and head. they look amazing!

~JubliantTroo Oct 3, 2012 Student Digital Artist

I''d like to give a little critique here. c:
You did a nice job on the back and the tail looks very nice too. Also, the face is very cute, especially the fluffy cheeks and shiny eyes. :3
But maybe the ears are a little too long? Draw them rather wider and less high next time maybe.
Check ou this picture, which will practically visualize the rest of my critique: [link]
The legs are too long on this one- hehee I can tell you draw a lot of canines. x) Aso the perspective on the front paws is a bit weird- keep the perspective on the hind paws (is that what it's called?) in mind! Also note that the front legs start further below and the shape of the hind legs could be improved a little- it's very curvy right now.
Hope that this is not too much and that I could help!