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Its Kiara~

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Lol :iconblackchaos100: is going to be mad to see that i really didnt go to sleep XDD Sorry love


I had an urge to practice some anatomy, it was just annoying me all day XDD

I know this is a fail, but I just CANNOT find whats wrong with it, i think its her stomach, back legs, her spine, i cant find it

help?

Enjoy the doodle :3

no redlining ^w^
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Gosh, I'm impressed with how much improvement you have made!

I guess all go from top to bottom on the anatomy,,,,,
Ears- Look pretty good! I noticed though, they look way to big.

Head and neck- I enjoy looking at her expression, it's really cute >u< Though, you should make the neck longer, right now there's not much room between the shoulders and head.

Body- I think it looks pretty good, Though the limbs look like they were just stuck on.

Legs and paws- They look too fat for a cat's, I think they should be much thinner. The paws look as if they're the same bone as the leg, which they aren't. Also, paws have four toes, not three.

Tail- The tail looks as if it were just plastered on, and not really a part of the spine.

There's your critique, I tried to be as honest as I could! .u.' Have a nice day~