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So close, and yet...so far..

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Some vent art, nothing much

did some practice with hands, not proud of it, but its vent, who cares.

merw, just vent i guess, its how i feel everyday, really I do nothing all day, and all I want, is to just be with someone, and that someone is behind a piece of glass that i cannot reach or touch...

and whenever we get a chance to see each other, so close.....then something happens and it makes me realize, how far away you really are...


vent is vent i guess...i might get over it tomorrow...good night..

i guess ill hold critiques on this one, i do need to learn, so yes, critiqe me, but no red lines yet.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First off, I'd like to say, "Good Job!" You've done another style, like I reccomended (though you probably didn't due this due to my prefrance <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)"/>) and you've done a great job!

Alright, anyways, to the anatomy. The hand itself is pretty good, execpt for a couple parts. The thing is about the thumb, is that it shouldn't have such a dramatic buldge. It should be smoother and less sharp.

Otherwise, the fingers are alright, but the pinky finger sticks out slightly. The arm is also rounded when it should be straight down.

All in all...good job! You did well!